Why Romeo And Juliet Is Shakespeare's Worst Play

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Okay, maybe it's not worse than The Merry Wives of Windsor. But Romeo and Juliet is definitely Shakespeare's worst famous play. Here's why:

Love is boring in Shakespeare.

Actually, not all love — fatherly love is totally heart-wrenching in The Tempest, A Winter's Tale, and Macbeth ("All my pretty ones? Did you say all?"). And not all Shakespeare — the sonnets show he could in fact make love sound hot and sad and interesting. But in almost all the plays, heterosexual romantic love is completely bland and boring. A great example of this is A Midsummer Night's Dream, wherein the lovers are so interchangeable that they are, in fact, interchanged. But Romeo and Juliet is a big offender in this area as well — the two fall in love at first sight (which happens all the time in Shakespeare and is never convincing), and then banter sweetly about how much they like each other until they both die. In fact...

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Love is especially boring in Romeo and Juliet.

Within a framework of general boringness, Shakespeare has two ways of making love interesting. The first is cross-dressing and/or mistaken identity. The sometimes-maligned Shakespeare in Love actually riffed on this trope with some hotness, leading me to believe that cross-dressing could be Gwyneth Paltrow's route out of terminal boringness too. Twelfth Night is kind of sexy in this regard, and Titania's scenes with Bottom in A Midsummer Night's Dream are at least funny.

Shakespeare's second way of injecting a little fire into his otherwise lifeless lovers is to pit them against each other. This is why The Taming of the Shrew, despite its obvious misogynistic tendencies, is really fun to watch, and why Benedick and Beatrice in Much Ado About Nothing are one of Shakespeare's most convincing couples (also why Benedick is pretty much the only role I can stand Kenneth Branagh in). Observe:

Beatrice: I wonder that you will still be talking, Signior
Benedick: nobody marks you.

Benedick: What, my dear Lady Disdain! are you yet living?

Beatrice: Is it possible disdain should die while she hath
such meet food to feed it as Signior Benedick?
Courtesy itself must convert to disdain, if you come
in her presence.

Benedick: Then is courtesy a turncoat. But it is certain I
am loved of all ladies, only you excepted: and I
would I could find in my heart that I had not a hard
heart; for, truly, I love none.

Beatrice: A dear happiness to women: they would else have
been troubled with a pernicious suitor. I thank God
and my cold blood, I am of your humour for that: I
had rather hear my dog bark at a crow than a man
swear he loves me.

Compare that with:

Juliet: What satisfaction canst thou have to-night?

Romeo: The exchange of thy love's faithful vow for mine.

Juliet: I gave thee mine before thou didst request it:
And yet I would it were to give again.

Romeo: Wouldst thou withdraw it? for what purpose, love?

Juliet: But to be frank, and give it thee again.
And yet I wish but for the thing I have:
My bounty is as boundless as the sea,
My love as deep; the more I give to thee,
The more I have, for both are infinite.

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Without any bickering or pants-wearing to keep things exciting, every conversation Romeo and Juliet have is some variant on, "I love you! No, I love you more!" Which isn't surprising — they're teenagers, both (but especially Juliet) are completely innocent of the world, and they really serve only one function, which is to be pushed around by Shakespeare in his drama of families at war. Which brings us to...

Everything else about Romeo and Juliet is kind of boring, too.

Even in plays where the love kind of sucks, Shakespeare usually gives us something else to hold our interest. Sometimes he wisely pushes the love plot off to the margins, as in The Tempest. In A Midsummer Night's Dream, we have both Bottom and Puck — the latter of whom has some of Shakespeare's best speeches ever — to entertain us while Demetriwhoever and Helenwhatsherface fuck around with one another. In Romeo and Juliet, the obvious real star is Mercutio (I am far from the first to say this), but he gives his famous dying speech ("A plague o' both your houses!") at the beginning of Act III and the play goes dourly downhill from there. There's some more killing (sorry Tybalt) and then a ridiculous poison mixup that leads to the totally unnecessary deaths of both lovers before they've even had time to have their first argument (unless you count the one about whether it's the fucking lark). It's tragic, all right, but it's really not that interesting.

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Of course, not all of this is Shakespeare's fault. It's tough to write about romantic love, especially when you're supposed to be all reassuring about it. And while Shakespeare's later tragedies were pretty un-reassuring on nearly every aspect of human life, Romeo and Juliet still tries to make us feel good about the world — sure, some innocents died, but they also experienced a brief and perfect communion with each other. Oh, and now their families are friends. This artificial optimism permeates most contemporary pop-culture depictions of love, and is a major reason why romantic comedies usually blow. And it's sad, because the flipside of the misconception that all love should be perfect is the truth that it's actually hottest when it's not.

DISCUSSION

Cimorene
Cimorene

R&J is my favorite Shakespeare tragedy. And this entire post is dead wrong.

1. Love is not boring in Shakespeare. You even list a bunch of ways in which it's not boring, so I'm not sure why you started with this argument only to then contradict yourself.

2. Love is not boring in R&J. When's the last time you actually read the play? Or was it just that you recently watched Baz Luhrmann's movie?

The play begins with Romeo in love with someone else entirely. And then he falls in love with Juliet only to start pulling the same BS with her that he was doing with Rosalind. But then she's like, Wait motherfucker don't go swearing on the moon about loving me, that's ridiculous. Let's get married!

That's right. Juliet proposes to Romeo.

2A. Witness the first scene between the two lovers:

ROMEO: If I profane with my unworthiest hand

This holy shrine, the gentle fine is this:

My lips, two blushing pilgrims, ready stand

To smooth that rough touch with a tender kiss.

JULIET: Good pilgrim, you do wrong your hand too much,

Which mannerly devotion shows in this;

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,

And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.

ROMEO: Have not saints lips, and holy palmers too?

JULIET: Ay, pilgrim, lips that they must use in prayer.

ROMEO :O, then, dear saint, let lips do what hands do;

They pray, grant thou, lest faith turn to despair.

JULIET:Saints do not move, though grant for prayers' sake.

ROMEO: Then move not, while my prayer's effect I take. (THEY TOTALLY KISS HERE)

Point: it's s perfect sonnet. Their entire first meeting up until they actually kiss is a sonnet—just like those sonnets you claim you enjoy!

2B. Have you read Juliet's soliloquy recently? It comes immediately after Tybalt's murder; she doesn't yet know that her husband has murdered her cousin and that he's been banished, and it's literally a scene in which she's like "Oh I'm so horny I can't wait until my husband gets here so we can DO IT."

"Come, gentle night, come, loving, black-brow'd night,

Give me my Romeo; and, when I shall die,

Take him and cut him out in little stars,

And he will make the face of heaven so fine

That all the world will be in love with night

And pay no worship to the garish sun.

Now, considering that "die" meant "orgasm," what does it mean for Juliet to be praying that when she dies, Romeo should be cut up into little stars? That shit is fucking crazy! And gorgeous.

3. The rest of the play isn't boring at all. It can be read as a critique of conventional romantical poeticizing (aka making fun of cliched dudes who are more into homoerotic brotherhood and their own narcissistic views of themselves as lovers than their professed beloved object). Also Juliet's soliloquy right before she takes the medicine is wicked macabre and grotesque. She imagines being entombed with all her rotting, squishy, dead ancestors including the recently dead (and therefore freshly corpsified) Tybalt, who would also be really angry at her.

Dear Jezebel: I'm totally glad you're branching out from faux-feminist coverage of Lady Gaga and stuff, or republishing other writers' work, or using your site as a platform for douches to spout of misogynist bullshit. And I love that you wrote about Shakespeare.

But before critiquing a piece of literature please read it first? And not like six years ago?

This reads like something a 15 year old kid would write during study hall to convince her English teacher to let them read Twilight instead of Romeo and Juliet. There are plenty of critiques to be made regarding Shakespeare—like, for example, Taming of the Shrew, which apparently the normalization of domestic violence is fun to watch? And better than proto-feminist Juliet's badass agency and assumption of her own sexuality?—but they all sound naive and ridiculous unless the writer has actually done the work. Shakespeare isn't the Daily Mail; you can't just give the piece a 10 minute skim in order to write an article about it. You actually have to read and think about it or your piece sounds like a tale told by an idiot (signifying nothing).

Love,

Cimorene

Ph.D. Candidate

SmartyPants University

Concentration: Feminist Shakespeare Studies (for real)

PS. I'm kind of sick so I'm sorry if this is a bit incoherent.